A Midsummer Night’s Dream: Impressive. . . Especially if you know your Elizabethan English
April 14, 2016
Shakespeare’s writing is famous for being hard to understand, and it should be, as he lived and wrote during the 1500s. In our school’s rendition of A Midsummer Night’s Dream, the acting is as good as ever, but the Shakespearean dialogue holds it back from being a truly enjoyable production for all.
The play is about two lovers, Hermia and Lysander. The problem is, Hermia’s father wants her to marry someone else. They elope into the forest to escape this arranged marriage and, in a radical twist of fate, they find themselves in the land of the fairies.
They are pursued by Hermia’s husband-to-be, Demetrius, who is in turn pursued by Helena, who is in love with him. While this is going on, the fairy queen and king are having an argument over whether or not they should accept the gift of an Indian prince. To make her seem like a fool, the king makes her fall in love with a boy he bewitches to have the head of a donkey.
Eventually, these two plot threads come together through the hands of a whimsical fairy named Puck, whose good-natured attempts at helping the fairy king only end up causing more trouble.
All this gets very confusing, and it only gets worse when you add in the old and nearly intangible English used in the production. If they had tried to edit the language to make it more palatable, this may have been an even better play, but, as it stands, the dialogue makes it too hard to follow.
Puck, the lead, is played by Laura Kelly, who was in both casts, does a fantastic job. Other important roles are played by Brett Young as Lysander, Stewart Wilson as Demetrius, Maddie Horton as Helena, and Marlise Dizon as Hermia in the Summer Cast. The Night cast had Brett Young as Lysander again, Zach Davis as Demetrius, Paige Holloway as Helena, and Drew Allison Millett as Hermia. All of them add their own style and flare to their roles, and the acting is as good as it always is here at Rocklin.
Sadly, the acting talent can’t carry a show that is meant to be a comedy, but can’t be understood. The actors try to remedy this by giving a plot synopsis before the show starts, but it is too short and confusing to fix the problems.
If you know or are close with one of the actors in the play, then the brilliant acting will belittle the challenge of Shakespearean dialogue. But if everyone on stage is a stranger and you don’t understand Shakespeare, then this might not be the show for you.
The show’s run time is a little under two hours and it will be running until Sunday. Shows start at 7 p.m. with 2 p.m. matinees on Saturday and Sunday.
*The original version of this story was changed after edits were made.
No thanks • Apr 14, 2016 at 11:02 pm
I saw the play tonight and it was entertaining, funny, NOT hard to understand and very well done! …sorry I can’t say the same thing about The Flash…
g • Apr 14, 2016 at 10:48 pm
YOUR JOB IS NOT TO CRITICIZE YOUR FELLOW STUDENTS. you are to support and congratulate your peers on their hard work and simply write about the play, not critique it. YOURE NOT A REAL CRITIC. don’t act like one.
Marcus Wells • Apr 14, 2016 at 9:25 pm
My name is Marcus and I go to Roseville High. Reading this review I was almost taken aback and considered if it was maybe satire. I was saddened to find out that is not true. Shakespeare and Shakespearean language have worked as a framework for all literature since the 1500’s and while, yes, his language can be difficult to understand at times, but to call it “unintelligible” makes me wonder if you’ve ever taken an English class in your life. The language of Shakespeare is an artform in itself and it was shocking to read that someone suggest they change the language of the show to be better understood. By doing that you lose all integrity that comes with such beautiful art as Midsummer. I would’ve thought as a writer, someone like you would have taken the time to consider the negativity you were spreading about this show and how it will reflect to the public how people perceive and make that decision to go witness amazing actors with an amazing story and an amazing script. I didn’t write this to attack you or shame you or change what you thought of the show, but I will ask you take a little bit more time to appreciate the beauty of the writing and maybe you would’ve had an easier time following the plot. I hope you have a great day.
Isabella Rovai • Apr 14, 2016 at 8:22 pm
I get that part of being a writer/journalist includes critiquing events, but honestly this is a high school and these people have worked so hard. To criticize something that is actually really well done is just rude. Would you ever write something like this about a sport at Rocklin High? No, because this is just a high school and those people are doing their best to put on a great performance.